T-iBT3, Writing 02
It is time for a complete argumentative essay.
In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.
With the ideas from the discussions in class, write a response to the topic above. You should aim at a maximum of 300 words within 25 minutes (including proofreading). Be advised that the esssay should be well organized and there should always be a topic sentence for each paragraph.
1st response: TIN
2nd response: NAM
3rd response: KIM THANH
4 people have left comments
Anonymous said:
Nam
Three year ago, I used to be having a part time job, a tutor, when I was student. The money I got from that job helps me to pay for the tuition fee. Obviously, part time jobs bring advantages for me. So, in my opinion, students should take a part time job while they are being in schools.
Firstly, the benefit of having a job for student is that earning money helps student to cover their needs during student life. Actually, in Vietnam, almost students are supported by their parents for their life spending. Of course, this amount of money are restricted, it can’t help them to buy laptop, reference books … which are very necessary for their study. So the best solution is students should take part time jobs and use the money earning for their purpose study.
Secondly, taking part time jobs can help student to accumulate their experience. This is very important for them to find a job after they graduate university. If students take part working in a company, they can study a lot of things outside what they study in school. For example, they will join in a team and work together to solve problems. This teamwork and solving problem skills that the students learn are noticed by interviewers and also show that they will be the best candidate for the jobs applying after graduating.
Finally, I prefer that student should take the jobs while they are studying in school. It brings student a lot of advantages. Besides having experiences help them to find jobs after graduating school, students also earn money which helps them not depend on their family.
Anonymous said:
phuc write
The reading talks about the company's problem and two solutions while the listening adds more information about that.
According to the reader,the problem is that the junior employees are not puntial for their work and that causes serious damage for the company. Therefore, the two seniors bring two solution. The first solution is that they get the juniors to compensate for the time they miss. If they come to work one hour late then they have to stay one hour to work for the missed time. The second solution is to cut down on their salaries based on their missed time. If they are late one hour, the company will cut one hour's money of their salaries.
In the listening, the first solution can reduce the company's damage but it doesn't actually stop the problem. Because the juniors can controll their time and decide to arrive late one hour and then stay up one hour to finish their work. The second solution can stop the problem but it can't help the company avoid loosing work. Because if the juniors keep arriving late, they still lose work. Therefore, the president finally decides to apply both the first solution and the second solution on the juniors.
Anonymous said:
Name:Nguyen Thi Kim Thanh -shift 2-toefl 3 ibt
Essay:
I agree with idea that is teenagers have jobs while they are student because there are so many benefits of having part time jobs.
“Experience is the best teacher” is an old cliché which we knew it. The most important and sometimes the hardest lessons we learn in life come from our participation in situation such as: team work, problem solving, social skill. All this cases you can not learn from a book and help us more confident, more having broad view about our jbs latter.
We can practice how to speak and write and understand what you learn subjects in school. It makes me understand and study by heard easily. For example, you are a medical student, you have to study so many disease, physiology, anatomy,… which you can not image. If you work extra time , you will practice on patients
Beside having experience, practicing what you learn, we can earn money that we pay tutoring fee, and buy small gift for some friends and figuring out budgets. This kind of independence helps students grow into adulthhood.
In a working process time, we learn new things beyond the books. No one can teach us how to get along with others or how to have self-respect. As we grow from children into teenagers, no one can teach us how to deal with pear pressure. As we leave adolescence, behind and enter adult life, no one can teach us how to deal with different problem in our society. It help us looking for guidelines along your life way.
Nevertheless, we consider carefully about working part time while you are a student because it lose many time, we wil
l not enough time to study your working..
NIGHTSKY said:
In some countries, students often have jobs while studying. I think this has both advantage and disadvantages.
First are disadvantages, there are many disadvantages when students have jobs while studying. All free time they have, they always use for jobs. So, they will not have enough time for studying, for keeping in touch with friends, for entertainments, and so on. If their studies is bad, students may fail their tests. So they must pay a big amount of money to retake the test they failed or even, learn again. Moreover, if teenagers have jobs so early, they may be seduced, and they lose themselves.
Second are advantages. When students can make their own money, they will spend money economically and they won't depend on their families. Furthermore, teeners will have their own experiences when working for money. So, in the future they will not face much difficulty to live themselves.
Therefore, students should have jobs while studying but they must be sure about studying. Because the main purpose of students is studying.